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Edit Request (1/23/2020)

@Spintendo: Good afternoon, and Happy New Year. Please see below for my proposed edits to the CDU article. Looking forward to receiving your feedback and hoping that we can get these edits implemented... Best, Chantelcartercdu (talk) 00:09, 24 January 2020 (UTC)

 Preceding unsigned comment added by Chantelcartercdu (talkcontribs) 17:28, 27 January 2020 (UTC)

Reply 27-JAN-2020

  • I've placed inline templates where information is needed to be clarified.
  • The source marked as original research should not be used. It is not entirely clear which program was the first self-sustained program, as Stanford graduated students in 73 and it's not clear when those students enrolled (in other words, it's not clear that their program took only one year to complete).
  • The phrase discussing the Watts riots as being "sparked" by inadequate access to health care needs to be omitted or re-worded, as that may have been a proximate cause (inequity), but not a direct cause.
  • The LA and NY Times sources are excellent, but the other sources used such as California Healthline and HCD Magazine need to be replaced by better sources. Section headers would work here as well, labeling the information under a specific topic.

Regards,  Spintendo  03:01, 28 January 2020 (UTC)

Reply 3-FEB-2020

@Spintendo: Thanks as always for your feedback. May I ask what disqualifies sources such as California Healthline and HCD Magazine from being considered credible? I'd like to keep this in mind for the next round as I look for new ones. Thanks, Chantelcartercdu (talk) 19:44, 3 February 2020 (UTC)

@Chantelcartercdu: Thank you for your question — I apologize for the delay in answering it. Wikipedia prefers using reliable, independent, WP:SECONDARY sources for its content.[a] In this instance, California Healthline is a publication owned by Kaiser, which due to its proximity to the healthcare industry, would not place it as an independent publication. HCD Magazine appears to be owned by Emerald X, an owner and operator of business-to-business tradeshows, which brings into question its reliability. Regards,  Spintendo  10:51, 27 February 2020 (UTC)

Notes

  1. These are to be preferred; content may also originate, to a lesser degree, from primary and tertiary sources.

edit request (February 25)

Hello, please see below for my latest submission for CDU's wikipedia page. Looking forward to receiving feedback. Thanks. Chantelcartercdu (talk) 23:11, 25 February 2020 (UTC)

I don't see too many issues with the text as it is, it looks very good (reference wise and grammar, etc.). The only issue I see is that there is some confusion in the difference between Drew and MLK. I placed those comments in the middle of the proposal because I wanted to understate them as questions that I had, as a reader, while reading the text up to that point in the article. Please feel free to read them. Perhaps when this text is integrated into the article, it will become more clear, but maybe perhaps a better description of how and why these two facilities merged (I want to say they merged, but actually I'm not even sure that's what they did, or if they just changed names). Please take a look at the feedback I wrote, and then feel free to respond with any ideas you have on it. I look forward to hearing them. To re-iterate, the only issues I have are with the section on Drew and MLK (the History and Affiliation section). The loss of accreditation section is much more clearer, although because it deals with these two facilities that I had the questions about, it's still fuzzy. Be sure to change the template's answer parameter from ans=y to ans=n when ready with your reply. Thank you! Regards,  Spintendo  09:56, 29 February 2020 (UTC)
@Chantelcartercdu: Just to follow up here, I'm going to go ahead and implement the requested changes for all the sections where the text was not an issue (which amounts to 12 of the entire request). The only areas where changes will be held back will be from the area I mentioned above, where I still had questions about the relationship between the one facility and the other. Still awaiting feedback from those questions. Again, thank you for your help! Regards,  Spintendo  13:50, 3 March 2020 (UTC)

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