Talk:Center for Clean Air Policy

Latest comment: 2 years ago by Spintendo in topic Edit request

Requesting edit to address outdated information

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  • What I think should be changed (include citations):
  • Change "Chief Executive Officer: Bill Tyndall" to "Executive Director: Allison Bender-Corbett"
  • Remove "Leila Yim Surratt" from list of key people.
  • Update revenue and expenses to be in-line with latest figures.
  • "Programs" section requires a complete rewrite, as the current programs of the organization differ completely from what is described.
    • New sections should be "Climate Finance", "Methane Mitigation", and "Carbon Markets".
    • An additional section might include information on the specific projects and topics CCAP is involved with across different regions of the world.
  • Why it should be changed:
  • The current information on the page is, in some cases, more than a decade out-of-date and no longer reflects the current status, goals, and priorities of the organization
  • References supporting the possible change (format using the "cite" button):

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Jerepott777 (talk) 15:11, 8 June 2023 (UTC)Reply

References

  1. "CENTER FOR CLEAN AIR POLICY - GuideStar Profile". GuideStar. Candid.
  2. "Regions". CCAP. Center for Clean Air Policy. {{cite web}}: Text "CCAP" ignored (help)
  3. "Programs". CCAP. Center for Clean Air Policy. {{cite web}}: Text "CCAP" ignored (help)
 Not done for now: Allison is currently listed as the Ex Dir. As for the other request, please provide appropriately referenced changes you want implemented. We cannot do the work for you. PK650 (talk) 09:33, 16 June 2023 (UTC)Reply
Understood, thank you. I've put together a comprehensive list of changes below.
Jerepott777 (talk) 18:41, 6 July 2023 (UTC)Reply

Reply 6-JUL-2023

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✅  Edit request partially implemented  

  1. Green tick The infobox |key people= parameter was updated.
  2. Red X The revenue and expenses parameters were not updated because no updated figures were provided for review.
  3. Red X The Overview section was not updated, because no references were provided with the request.
  4. Red X The History section was not updated, because no references were provided with the request.
  5. Red X The Programs section was not updated, because the proposed section contained claims which were only referenced by the subject organization. Per WP:ADVOCACY, the article is not the place for the organization to have its claims detailed.

Regards,  Spintendo  22:19, 6 July 2023 (UTC)Reply

Thank you for the quick reply. Here is an edited version of the above request with those concerns addressed. Please let me know if there are any more edits necessary.

Jerepott777 (talk) 00:06, 27 July 2023 (UTC)Reply

Reply 27-JUL-2023

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Below you will see where proposals from your request have been quoted with reviewer decisions and feedback inserted underneath, either accepting, declining or otherwise commenting upon your proposal(s). Please read the enclosed notes within the proposal review section below for information on each request.  Spintendo  03:09, 28 July 2023 (UTC)Reply

Edit request

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Thank you for your feedback. I've scaled back the overview and programs section in this (hopefully) final revision.

Jerepott777 (talk) 20:51, 7 August 2023 (UTC)Reply

Reply 14-AUG-2023

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Below you will see where proposals from your request have been quoted with reviewer decisions and feedback inserted underneath, either accepting, declining or otherwise commenting upon your proposal(s). Please read the enclosed notes within the proposal review section below for information on each request.  Spintendo  22:58, 14 August 2023 (UTC)Reply