Talk:Bloom Energy
Latest comment: 7 years ago by Conner at Bloom Energy in topic Bloom Energy Page Updates
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Bloom Energy Page Updates
editMy name is Conner and I work in the marketing department at Bloom Energy. The current page is too narrowly focused on our CEO and the founding details of the company, rather than milestones and useful company information regarding financials and current products offerings. I would like to share a draft of a dramatically improved version that has fleshed out many key business details, milestones, product and services information, and better citations as a replacement for the current page. This is a comprehensive history that includes criticisms and praise. I was hoping a disinterested editor might take the time to take a look and let me know if they have any feedback. Conner at Bloom Energy (talk) 18:14, 12 June 2019 (UTC)