Talk:Ann Dallas

Latest comment: 1 month ago by Dclemens1971 in topic Did you know nomination

Did you know nomination

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The result was: promoted by Dclemens1971 (talk) 22:25, 26 April 2026 (UTC)Reply

  • Source: The Galloway News, "Kirkcudbright's Right Royal Day": "the Queen ... had first looked at the stuido area where artist Richard Turner was working and then met Mrs Ann Dallas, the last surviving member of the old school of painters in Kirkcudbright"
Created by Usernameunique (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 89 past nominations.

Usernameunique (talk) 03:12, 7 April 2026 (UTC).Reply

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall: New enough, long enough, unlikely copyvio according to Earwig, very well written, and everything seems to be cited. Nice work on the article! I spotted no issues. The hook is also interesting, but has a small grammatical error. "Amongst" should only be used if "member" is plural. The article did say that there was perhaps another living member (Tom Lochhead), so it would be best just to paraphrase the quote. Perhaps something like:

    • "by the time she met Queen Elizabeth II, Ann Dallas was one of the last surviving members of the old school of painters in Kirkcudbright?"

    Other than that, everything seems to be fine. Good job! Chomik! (talk?) 01:04, 18 April 2026 (UTC)Reply

    • Thanks, Chomik1129. You've hit the nail on the head—the hook originally omitted the "amongst", then I found the source mentioning Tom Lochhead, so I added "amongst" to account for that. Since we're no longer using the quotation, How about tightening it to:
    ALT2: ... that by the time she met Queen Elizabeth II, Ann Dallas was amongst the last surviving members of the Kirkcudbright Artists' Colony?
    Thanks, --Usernameunique (talk) 01:24, 18 April 2026 (UTC)Reply