Talk:A Wizard of Mars

Latest comment: 12 hours ago by BennBluee in topic Plot Section

Tone and Style

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This article currently is written in an essay or speaing style that is unencyclopedic. I am going to try to begin work on it and wanted to give everyone a heads up. I'm a new editor so if I'm going about this the wrong way just message me and tell me what I'm doing wrong. During the time that we're working on style I've added the Inappropriate Tone template at the top so anyone else editing realizes whats goin on. Thanks! S0unds4il0r (talk) 18:49, 9 July 2010 (UTC)Reply

Plot Section

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The plot section is a very very close paraphrase of the publishers promo material: https://www.google.co.uk/books/edition/A_Wizard_of_Mars/TaFMweQfzO4C?hl=en

This section should be rewritten. BennBluee (talk) 17:47, 12 June 2026 (UTC)Reply