Talk:A Transfer/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 23:08, 13 March 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:08, 13 March 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• In the infobox, use "plainlist" instead of "<br/>" per the rules on the template. Done
• Is the "|story=Gainax" parameter necessary?
• A Transfer" → "A Transfer" Done
• What does "7.1% rating" mean?

It means that 7.1% of Japan's televisions were tuned to Tokyo TV during the run. I took it for granted, given the percentage.

Plot

• The plot is 417 words, while it should be under 400 per WP:TVPLOT. Done
• Remove the comma after "poorly for Nerv".

Removed.

Production

• What exactly is "a mount" within the context of the show?

Specified.

Cultural references and themes

• The caption on the image should describe its significance within the article.
• Also improve the non-free use rationales of the images (see MOS:TVIMAGE for help).

Hope it helps.

• "awkward communication. ... Evangelion" → "awkward communication [...] Evangelion"

Fixed.

• "the sixties inspire" → "the 1960s inspired" Done
• Wikipedia doesn't normally use phrases like "he said" so try rewording the sentence. Done
• References should be included at the end of each quote, so recite certain sources. Done
• "A transfer" → "A Transfer" Done

Reception

• Again, explain what "7.1% rating" means and/or refers to.
• The second reference after "home video releases" is missing parts of its title. Done
• "as it shows" → "as it showed" Done

Notes and references

• Change the "Notes" header to "References", add a subsection titled "Citations" and make the original "References" section into a "Bibliography" subsection (example). Done
• Archive all archivable sources (either manually or with this tool). Done
• Optional, but it helps readers if you link websites within the "|website=" parameter. Done

@Some Dude From North Carolina:Tried my best.--TeenAngels1234 (talk) 19:49, 14 March 2021 (UTC)

Progress

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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