Talk:2023 Israeli female tank crew fight

Nominating this article for deletion

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2024 updates, source questions (no consensus on AFD)

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Hello! I came across this article today. The sources for this article, specifically the second one, maybe not the best? I don't think a New York Sun article written by a former Israeli intelligence officer is the encyclopedic tone we need. I know this is a contentious article, and people see value it, but right now it's a feminist war puff piece. see also purplewashing Soyembika (talk) 09:43, 13 January 2024 (UTC)Reply

@Soyembika As a feminist, I do NOT think this is a "feminist war puff piece", it's just a "war puff piece". There's a very obvious (and not very nice) reason the IDF might need to have all female tank crews (not mixed), and a feminist wouldn't leave that out. Irtapil (talk) 12:57, 14 January 2024 (UTC)Reply
@Irtapil thank you for replying to this. I feel similarly, that this is NOT feminist. I did not articulate that at all in my original comment. ‘“feminist” war puff piece’ with heavy emphasis on the quotes. Soyembika (talk) 16:55, 14 January 2024 (UTC)Reply
The page is also currently deriving its name from headlines, in opposition to WP:HEADLINES, and is not a properly encyclopedic WP:NCE title. Iskandar323 (talk) 09:52, 13 January 2024 (UTC)Reply
It's been nominated since October 10th too. I'm trying to word myself in a polite way but I am kind of wondering if this article does more harm than good in it's current state? Like it's objectively not up to code Soyembika (talk) 10:12, 13 January 2024 (UTC)Reply
@Soyembika My first thought when I was part way through reading it was "were the people they killed even armed?" I thought I was maybe being too "conspiracy theorist" but from the rest of your comments, maybe that wasn't such an unreasonable question. How close to the border was this? Irtapil (talk) 12:57, 14 January 2024 (UTC)Reply
But them coming from an attack at another location explains it, less interesting, but also less horrifying, and this war has more than enough horrifying already. Irtapil (talk) 15:21, 14 January 2024 (UTC)Reply
The NY Sun is not affiliated with The Sun (UK), which is listed on WP:RSP. Ted Lapkin's background as a former IDF combat soldier in 1982, makes them more of an authority on the subject, not less. Marokwitz (talk) 07:13, 14 January 2024 (UTC)Reply
@Marokwitz The problem is it makes him more expert but also more biased, it's an awkward trade off. Irtapil (talk) 12:57, 14 January 2024 (UTC)Reply
Aha sorry I tagged that wrong. You are right, The New York Sun is not affiliated with The Sun (UK). Soyembika (talk) 07:22, 14 January 2024 (UTC)Reply
@Marokwitz and are you saying The Sun is a reliable source? I thought it was tabloid trash? Irtapil (talk) 12:57, 14 January 2024 (UTC)Reply
Hello if you get a chance to reply please do Soyembika (talk) 22:10, 20 January 2024 (UTC)Reply
Ted Lapkins writer bio in the source says "strategic communications, reputation management, and government relations."
I have such a hard time accepting this archived webpage is so authoritative it warrants being reffed 15 times in the article. News is not static, and changes when new information is made available. This article dates itself with the sources it uses Soyembika (talk) 23:21, 20 January 2024 (UTC)Reply
@Marokwitzsorry forgot to ping Soyembika (talk) 23:23, 20 January 2024 (UTC)Reply
The one considered unreliable is a different Sun (UK-based); I'm not aware of this newspaper being problematic. You can ask at WP:RSN Marokwitz (talk) 05:55, 21 January 2024 (UTC)Reply

Shouldn't the article be rejected if there is no consensus for it to exist, per WP:ONUS? Not a rhetorical question, genuinely wondering about how these things are decided. IOHANNVSVERVS (talk) 15:21, 14 January 2024 (UTC)Reply

@IOHANNVSVERVS no, i think it should lean towards keep, we can always delete it later. Give those who want to keep it a few weeks to improve it. The merge idea doesn't seem to work because it connects to too many other events? Irtapil (talk) 15:34, 14 January 2024 (UTC)Reply
@IOHANNVSVERVS But we could merge it with 2023 Hamas-led attack on Israel like a lot of other small battles. We can always split it out again if it grows into something worth a whole article. Irtapil (talk) 15:59, 14 January 2024 (UTC)Reply

The numbers are weird.

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This story has a big gap or something?

  • 11 Gazans attack a kibbutz
  • 13 Kibutz residents killed? I presume that 13 doesn't include Gazans?
  • no hostages?
  • then this tank crew kill 50 people?
Where did the other 39 come from? When? and why were they killed?
  • did the IDF just round up to the nearest 50?
  • or are there 50 unclaimed bodies still in an Israeli morgue?

And, for the day as a whole, why does a culture frequently stereotyped as glorifying death in battle claim (as far as i can tell) zero martyrs from 7 October? … while Israel claims there were 200 to 1200 Gazans who died in southern Israel that day? Irtapil (talk) 11:03, 14 January 2024 (UTC)Reply

Good point - I checked the source in Russian and it says nothing about "11 Gazans", so for now I removed this fact and added a [citation needed] tag. Other source that is cited later says over 100 militants took positions in Kibbutz Sufa in addition to the battle in Kibbutz Holit. Marokwitz (talk) 12:05, 14 January 2024 (UTC)Reply
@Marokwitz I think I added "Gazans" in lieu of a {{citation needed}} or "alleged" or "presumed". It would have been either "terrorist" or "Hamas militant" before. Other pages have a consensus that we should avoid "terrorist", and the sources cited were sources that call everyone and everything "Hamas" (PIJ, PFLP, Gazan civilians, the UN, etc.). I was confident from other sources that they were definitely not any of the very well documented 1139 October 7 victims, so I went with definite Gazan rather than "alleged militant" or "presumed Hamas". But maybe that was too much deduction and I should have stuck with "alleged" or "presumed" if the source seemed unreliable for the level of specificity stated? Irtapil (talk) 15:53, 14 January 2024 (UTC)Reply
@Marokwitz so now we have all 50 materialising from the either? But more seriously, I think that was a connection to the Holit Massacre page, I'm leaning more and not towards merging these. Irtapil (talk) 12:57, 14 January 2024 (UTC)Reply
@Marokwitz oh, it was between two of them? Then it's unclear which to merge with? So maybe merge doesn't work? Irtapil (talk) 13:01, 14 January 2024 (UTC)Reply
Merging to any other article is not a good idea because the combat occurred over 17 hours at different locations, so there is no clear merge target Marokwitz (talk) 13:28, 14 January 2024 (UTC)Reply
@Marokwitz if keeping the article, it definitely needs a map, and "see also" to related events. Irtapil (talk) 15:19, 14 January 2024 (UTC)Reply
Yes, that's a great idea. Marokwitz (talk) 18:24, 14 January 2024 (UTC)Reply
@Marokwitz
However, I think this is just a minor part of the Battle of Sufa. I've not actually looked at the proper deletion discussion yet.
Irtapil (talk) 20:20, 14 January 2024 (UTC)Reply