Talk:Bea Sprung

Latest comment: 6 months ago by AirshipJungleman29 in topic Did you know nomination

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. You can locate your hook here. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 03:40, 8 December 2025 (UTC)Reply

  • Source: NXGN 2023: The 25 best wonderkids in women's football
  • (Hon lämnar Skåne bakom sig med tre SM-guld och en cuptitel i bagaget.
  • She leaves Skåne County behind with three Swedish championships and a cup title.
  • ALT1: ... that GOAL included Bea Sprung among the 25 best wonderkids in women's football in 2023, or that she credits her competitive swimming background with aiding her development as a footballer?
  • Source: See first source for ALT0 hook
  • Vad har simningen gett dig?
  • – Disciplin skulle jag säga. Du måste pusha dig själv på ett annat sätt, inte riktigt som du gör på fotbollsplanen. Det är mer mängdträning. Men du måste pressa dig själv, och det tror jag har hjälpt mig.
  • What has swimming given you?
  • I would say discipline. You have to push yourself in a different way, not quite like you do on the football pitch. It's a higher training volume. But you need to push yourself and I believe that has helped me.
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  • Comment: Since this is my first DYK-nomination, any advise/feedback is appreciated.
Created by Chili Stampede (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.

Chili Stampede (talk) 05:48, 7 November 2025 (UTC).Reply

  • Passes DYKcheck and copyvio check, both hooks look good/interesting and are backed by three WP:RS's. Article was created on 3 November 2025 and submitted as a DYK on 7 November 2025, so within the 7-day limit. No QPQ performed. Chili Stampede: I'm torn between your two hooks. What if the second was reworded to read something like:
...that GOAL included Bea Sprung among the 25 best wonderkids in women's football in 2023 and that she credits her competitive swimming background with her skills as a footballer?
There's something about the word 'or' in each hook that makes it a little awkward. I'm trying to reword the second to better link the two halves of the overall sentence. What do you think? Thanks! CaptainAngus (talk) 21:44, 30 November 2025 (UTC)Reply
The issue here is that the hook proposal is complicated and could really be split into two separate hooks. How do these options sound instead?
ALT2 ... that GOAL included Bea Sprung among the 25 best wonderkids in women's football in 2023?
ALT3 ... that Bea Sprung credits her competitive swimming background with aiding her development as a footballer?
Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 09:36, 1 December 2025 (UTC)Reply
I think you summed it up. I'd lean towards ALT3 myself, but either would work. Chili Stampede? CaptainAngus (talk) 03:58, 2 December 2025 (UTC)Reply
@Chili Stampede: Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 12:00, 2 December 2025 (UTC)Reply
@CaptainAngus:@Narutolovehinata5: Thanks for the feedback. I like both Alt2 and Alt3. I was originally torn between which hook I would submit, so I combined them into one, but I suppose less is more in this case. Chili Stampede (talk) 17:33, 2 December 2025 (UTC)Reply
Updated status to pass based on either ALT2 or ALT3. Thank you both! CaptainAngus (talk) 01:43, 3 December 2025 (UTC)Reply