Markdphillips

Your submission at Articles for creation: MarkDPhillips (June 14)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Tokyogirl79 was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

 The comment the reviewer left was:

This needs heavy editing for tone and it also needs more sourcing to establish notability and to back up the claims in the article. I'll try to do a cleanup to see what I can do with the tone, but offhand I think that most of this would have to be removed since the bulk of it is almost completely unsourced. Also, avoid links to e-commerce sites like Amazon, as this is seen as self-promotion, given that it looks like the main author of the article is Phillips.

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Tokyogirl79 (｡◕‿◕｡) 05:54, 14 June 2016 (UTC)

Hello! Markdphillips, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Tokyogirl79 (｡◕‿◕｡) 05:54, 14 June 2016 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:MarkDPhillips

Hello, Markdphillips. It has been over six months since you last edited your Articles for Creation draft article submission, "MarkDPhillips".

In accordance with our policy that Articles for Creation is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply and remove the {{db-afc}} or {{db-g13}} code.

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. 1989 (talk) 05:29, 2 January 2017 (UTC)