Talk:Don't Touch That Dial/GA1
Latest comment: 4 years ago by Adamstom.97 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 14:52, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 14:52, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
- Wikipedia:Short description: All mainspace articles should have a short description.
- Plot section is less than 400 words so it passes MOS:TVPLOT.
- "... sees a colorful toy helicopter" – it should be established that the world is in black-and-white
- Remove the commas after "outside the house", "bleeds in color", and "Vision in the series".
- "he used lighting to try create" → "he used lighting to try to create"
- "for Olsen to try mimic" → "for Olsen to try to mimic"
- Add a comma after "but because of COVID-19 restrictions".
- "Nielsen Media Research, who measure" → "Nielsen Media Research, which measures" (company)
- Add hyphens between "most watched", "most streamed", and "most viewed".
- "the top 0.2% or series" – typo?
- "had 9.3% share" → "had a 9.3% share"
- Be consistent with Comicbook.com or ComicBook.com.
- "Shannon Miller, Liz" → "Miller, Liz Shannon" (#37)
- Citation #49 is missing an author credit ("Seymour, Mike").
- Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 02:33, 2 September 2021 (UTC)
- All done except the short description and the black-and-white clarification in the plot summary, which I'll leave for another editor. —El Millo (talk) 02:51, 2 September 2021 (UTC)
- Some Dude From North Carolina A short description is there, automatically added by the infobox. I tried to make a pass at the black and white clarification, but Adamstom.97 might want a go at it. - Favre1fan93 (talk) 03:04, 2 September 2021 (UTC)
- Thanks team, I have made the black-and-white bit simpler but am open to trying other wording as well. - adamstom97 (talk) 04:29, 2 September 2021 (UTC)
- Some Dude From North Carolina A short description is there, automatically added by the infobox. I tried to make a pass at the black and white clarification, but Adamstom.97 might want a go at it. - Favre1fan93 (talk) 03:04, 2 September 2021 (UTC)
- All done except the short description and the black-and-white clarification in the plot summary, which I'll leave for another editor. —El Millo (talk) 02:51, 2 September 2021 (UTC)
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