Talk:Bonde do Brunão/GA1

GA review

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Nominator: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 11:05, 29 October 2025 (UTC)

Reviewer: Olliefant (talk · contribs) 18:45, 29 October 2025 (UTC)

Lead

• Link "The Smeezingtons"
• Why aren't the songwriter names linked in the infobox?
• "promote his Brazilian tour" list the name of the tour

 Done

Background and development

• MOS:DASH violation in "Bruno Mars Live (2022–2024) tour"
• Link "TikTok" and "Instagram"
• "million views.[5] and fans asked for the official release." move the citation to the end of the sentence, also cut that extra period
• "produced by the former and the latter three as the Stereotypes," I find this wording a little awkward

 Done

Composition

• I'd merge this with another section as it's a little short comparatively
• Add interwiki links to "Cerol na Mão" and "Bonde do Tigrão" as they exist on pt Wikipedia
• 1) Linguistic coherence: The reader expects to remain in the same language.
• 2) Accessibility: An article in another language may be useless or confusing for those who do not understand it.
• 3) Quality criteria: "Good" or "featured" articles are penalized if they contain interlinguistic links within the body of the text.
• 4) Correct alternative: Create link as a source that takes you there. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 00:04, 30 October 2025 (UTC)

  I don't see how adding one would create any of these problems, there are tons of GAs with Template:Interlanguage link Olliefant (she/her) 02:40, 30 October 2025 (UTC)

  Take a look now. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 12:05, 30 October 2025 (UTC)

 Done

Release

• Italicize "Fortnite Festival"
• Link "Apple Music"
• "The song was first previewed in November 2024" where was it previewed?
• Any reason for the late release on Apple Music?

Not given and couldn't find anything. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 23:22, 29 October 2025 (UTC)

• "The art cover features outline of the Brazilian country drawn with green and yellow colors as a tribute to the country" this doesn't feel like release info but it does warrent inclusion in the page. Find this another place on the page, I'd suggest "Background and development"

 Done

Music video

• "Cachaça" is linked twice
• "The video ends with a final message "Eu te amo Brasil" list the English translation

 Done

Reception

• "Although, some Brazilian listeners accused him" expand on who these are
• Add some content from the "Metrópoles" review

Metroples only shares the view of people and plagiarism, nothing else. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 17:10, 30 October 2025 (UTC)

 Done

Promotion and live shows

• Italicize "Fortnite Festival"
• " an enounces "porra" (popular Brazilian slang term" this doesn't have a close parenthesis
• "Mars also mentioned where are the "solteiras" (single woman), later included on the lyrics of "Bonde do Brunão"." Tweak this wording
• "Fortnite added an emote of Mars" It should say "Epic Games added an emote of Mars to Fortnite" as Epic Games is the developer
• "In 2023, Nathalia Nunes, branding and experience design specialist, commented on the video "This trail from before, during, and after the show was crucial for stimulating and building fan loyalty" this seems like pure trivia and should be removed
• "He received a symbolic CPF" should be "He received a symbolic CPF number"

 Done

Credits

• Looks fairly standard

Release history

• Any reason this is separate from "Release"?

If its release in different countries or formats usually gets one, plus its in already in prose. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 22:46, 29 October 2025 (UTC)

References

• Ref 2, link "CNN Brasil" for consistency
• Ref 16 has an MOS:DASH Violation

 Done

• Didn't find any verification problems

@Olliefant: I have address your concerns. Please let me know if you are okay with some of the changes. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 00:05, 30 October 2025 (UTC)

@Olliefant: I believe I have addressed all your concerns. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 17:23, 30 October 2025 (UTC)

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.