Talk:2024 World Athletics Indoor Championships – Women's 400 metres/GA1

GA review

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Nominator: Editør (talk · contribs) 00:45, 21 January 2025 (UTC)

Reviewer: It is a wonderful world (talk · contribs) 07:05, 11 May 2025 (UTC)

Hi @Editør, review is below. I made minor prose changes myself, let me know if you have any issues with my edits. IAWW (talk) 07:05, 11 May 2025 (UTC)

Thank you for your review. I've changed your edit of the Qualification section, because it was excluding running the time of the entry standard exactly. I have already looked at several of your points and will try to come back for rest in the next few days. – Editør (talk) 10:52, 11 May 2025 (UTC)

@Editør Thanks, please ping me when done. IAWW (talk) 11:34, 11 May 2025 (UTC)

@It is a wonderful world, I have looked at everything. Let me know if I've missed anything or you have any additional points. – Editør (talk) 11:55, 11 May 2025 (UTC)

Thanks for responding to my points, I think the article looks really good now. Nice work. Passing. IAWW (talk) 14:31, 11 May 2025 (UTC)

Prose (Criteria 1a, 1b, 4) clock

Lead

Looks good :)

Background

Looks good :)

Qualification

entry standards of 51.60 s indoor or 50.50 s outdoor: Could you clarify what the major difference is between indoor and outdoor? IAWW (talk) 07:05, 11 May 2025 (UTC)

Indoor tracks are typically 200 metres long and sloped inwards in the curves. Outdoor tracks are typically 400 metres long and flat. I have added the track length to the text, hopefully this clarifies it enough. – Editør (talk) 11:19, 11 May 2025 (UTC)

Round 1

Looks good :)

Semi-finals

What is a "yellow card"? IAWW (talk) 07:05, 11 May 2025 (UTC)

I've added a wikilink to Yellow card (sport)#Athletics. – Editør (talk) 10:21, 11 May 2025 (UTC)

Final

A lot of this section is unsourced. IAWW (talk) 07:05, 11 May 2025 (UTC)

The archived source was not the correct version, I've corrected this and added a second source for the former records. I believe everything is now covered. – Editør (talk) 10:19, 11 May 2025 (UTC)

There must be some available sourcing on the reactions/reception of the race. IAWW (talk) 07:05, 11 May 2025 (UTC)

I've added commentary from three secondary sources and a quote by Bol. – Editør (talk) 11:52, 11 May 2025 (UTC)

Sources clock

Health/formatting (Criterion 2a) Y

No issues for GA

Reliability (Criterion 2b) Y

Almost all World Athletics with one Reuters source

Spot check (Criteria 2b, 2c, 2d) clock

[3]: Y

[5b]: Y

[6]: Y

[4c]: Doesn't support the time "10:20" IAWW (talk) 07:05, 11 May 2025 (UTC)

I've corrected the time per source. – Editør (talk) 10:35, 11 May 2025 (UTC)

[8a]: Good aside from the time "20:50" again IAWW (talk) 07:05, 11 May 2025 (UTC)

I've replaced the source with the result summary with the result details for the prose, which does include the time. – Editør (talk) 10:36, 11 May 2025 (UTC)

[9b]: Just misses that it was a tied season best IAWW (talk) 07:05, 11 May 2025 (UTC)

I've added as source her WA profile which includes her result statistics for 2024. – Editør (talk) 10:41, 11 May 2025 (UTC)

Copyvio (Criterion 2d) Y

Earwig finds nothing and I found no issues on the spot check.

Scope (Criteria 3a, 3b) clock

This article needs much more secondary sourcing. Here are some available:

• https://www.tntsports.co.uk/athletics/world-indoor-championships/2024/world-indoor-athletics-championships-josh-kerr-and-molly-caudery-win-gold-femke-bol-sets-world-recor_sto10046211/story.shtml
• https://www.bbc.co.uk/sport/athletics/68459875
• https://www.olympics.com/en/news/world-athletics-indoor-champs-2024-femke-bol-400m-world-record-gold
• https://www.reuters.com/sports/athletics/bol-crushes-world-record-kerr-thrills-home-crowd-world-indoors-2024-03-02/ – use this source more. IAWW (talk) 07:05, 11 May 2025 (UTC)

I have used the Reuters source again, added the Olympics.com source, and added an Athletics Weekly article as source too. – Editør (talk) 11:54, 11 May 2025 (UTC)

I also added a quote in the semi-finals subsection. – Editør (talk) 12:04, 11 May 2025 (UTC)

Media Y

This article is extremely well illustrated.

Suggestions (not needed for GA promotion)

Suggest archiving unarchived links to prevent link rot IAWW (talk) 07:05, 11 May 2025 (UTC)

There is some inconsistency in your application of MOS:NUM: "Twenty-four" and "eighteen" are spelled out in the lead and background sections, while "25" and "19" and more are not spelled out. IAWW (talk) 07:05, 11 May 2025 (UTC)

I spelled out the two other numbers. – Editør (talk) 10:45, 11 May 2025 (UTC)

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